Jayna Barredo
Thursday, July 21, 2011
What do you think of this start of a story [:3] ?
Human bodies have a lot of water in them as well... You might need a few words of explanation as to why Quill doesn't freeze herself - or perhaps a thought from her that even if she does that, it's better than what the monster is going to do to her.
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